Two possible sentences for each of the examples are . . .

The model walked down the runway.
The man showed his biceps.
The man hit a motorcycle with his car.
Mrs. Smith is not my favorite person.

These sentences are possibilities for changing the loaded words into neutral language.

      Garfield gives you a big "smack" for your hard work!

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